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What is an ideal holiday for you?

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Chammy.
I postponed our class last Tuesday because I left my laptop at my hotel. So I felt like it's been a long time since I talked with you.
And I thought 2 classes a week would be enough. But it is not...
I should have re-enrolled 3 times classes a week. Let me think it again after 3 months.

What is an ideal holiday for you?
I spent my holidays with my family and it is not what I wanted. Actually I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafe.
I usually spent my holiday drawing logos and drinking coffee and reading books. My job is interested in hospitality so I have my chance to meet guests and talk. Sometime I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, figure out the way to go for the future.
And it made me challenge the certificate of hotel management again even though I failed it 3 times.
Those are my ideal holiday.

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Hi there, Han!~
Yeah, it feels strange these days as we used to have classes 5 days a week. And we're just getting used to the new schedule~... At first, I didn't understand why you prefer spending your holidays alone but while checking it, I guess you were able to justify it. I understand the reason considering the nature of your work.^^ For now, I must say welcome back to work and happy working. 
-Chammy

Chammy.
I postponed our class last Tuesday because I left my laptop at my hotel. So I felt like it's been a long time since I talked with you.
And I thought 2 classes a week would be enough. But it is not...
I should have re-enrolled 3 times classes a week. Let me think it again after 3 months.


I spent my holidays with my family and it is not what I wanted. Actually I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafe.
>>I spent my holidays with my family and it was not what I wanted. Actually, I like to enjoy my time by myself in some cafes
I usually spent my holiday drawing logos and drinking coffee and reading books.
>>I usually spend my holidays drawing logos, drinking coffee, and reading books.
My job is interested in hospitality so I have my chance to meet guests and talk.
>>Correct
OR
>>Since I am working in the hospitality industry, I get to meet and talk with guests.
Sometime I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. 
>> Sometimes I want to be alone without talking. I like to read the books about success stories. 
By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, figure out the way to go for the future.
>>By reading the books, I can find out what is wrong with me about bad habits, and figure out the way to go for the future.
And it made me challenge the certificate of hotel management again even though I failed it 3 times.Those are my ideal holidays.
>> And it challenged me to retake the hotel management certificate even though I failed it 3 times. Those are my ideal holidays. 
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