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Don\'t waste clothes

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I had old clothes in my closet that I wear when I was young.
I think throw away clothes are waste to me.
So, I gave them to my cousin.
She is 7 years old, so, she liked those clothes.
However, I throw away clothes that I don't wear anymore.
It is very waste, but I don't know the ways that give them to charity and the clothes are so big to cousin.
These days, earth is getting as dirty as trash.
Therefore, we should don't waste our clothes.

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Hi Julie!
Please take note of common expressions.
These are always a challenge for students.
However, in time, I know you will get them perfectly.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I had old clothes in my closet that I wear when I was young.
>> I had old clothes in my closet that I wore when I was young.
I think throw away clothes are waste to me.
>> I think throwing clothes away is a waste.
So, I gave them to my cousin.
>> Correct
She is 7 years old, so, she liked those clothes.
>> She is 7 years old, so, she likes those clothes.
However, I throw away clothes that I don't wear anymore.
>> Correct
It is very waste, but I don't know the ways that give them to charity and the clothes are so big to cousin.
>> It is really a waste, but I don't know how to give them to charity and the clothes are also too big for my cousin.
These days, earth is getting as dirty as trash.
>> These days, the earth is getting filled with trash. 
Therefore, we should don't waste our clothes.
>> Therefore, we should avoid throwing our clothes away. 
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