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Is there something you regret buying? Why?

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Of course, there are many stuff I regret after buying. A couple of years ago, I wanted to buy earphone made by Dr.Dre. Just, for my fashion. So, I worked hard as a part-time job for buying that. But, it didn't make me impressed to the sound quality after buying it. It's just normal earphone. Compared to other things is that the sound of base quality is much better than others. I guess I just wanted to be fashionable at that time. And, I have another thing is to buy a character in RPG of computer game. I didn't expect that will be screwed up...

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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Of course, there are many stuff I regret after buying. 
>> CORRECT!
A couple of years ago, I wanted to buy earphone made by Dr.Dre. Just, for my fashion. 
>> A couple of years ago, I wanted to buy an earphone made by Dr. Dre. just for fashion. 
So, I worked hard as a part-time job for buying that. 
>> So, I worked hard at my part-time job just to buy that. 
OR >> So, I worked hard as a part-timer just to have that.
But, it didn't make me impressed to the sound quality after buying it. 
>> But, the sound quality didn't make me impressed after buying it. 
It's just normal earphone. 
>> It's just a normal earphone. 
Compared to other things is that the sound of base quality is much better than others. 
>> Compared to other things, the sound quality of the bass is much better.
I guess I just wanted to be fashionable at that time. 
>> CORRECT!
And, I have another thing is to buy a character in RPG of computer game. 
>> And, I have another thing, that is when I bought a character in RPG in a computer game. 
I didn't expect that will be screwed up...
>> I didn't expect that it will screwed me up.

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