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5. I do a pictionary.
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>> Let's play a pictionary

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1. It was snowy really.
>> It was really snowy.
2. I know a really interesting fact about snow.
correct, or
>> I know an intriguing fact about snow.
3. It's coming towards like this.
>> It's coming downwards like this.
5. I do a pictionary.
Correct, or
>> Let's play a pictionary
6. 3rd grade

>>I had my first caricature drawing when I was in 3rd grade.
7. I'll show you what it draw.
>> I'll show you how I drew it.
8. Do you have a problem with human drawings?

>> Do you have difficulty drawing humans?
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