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Which one best fits you, staying up until the wee hours with your friends or sleeping early and waking up early as well the next day? For me, sleeping early and waking up early as well the next day fits me best. Because, if I stay up late, my condition becomes bad.

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Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
For me, sleeping early and waking up early as well the next day fits me best. Because, if I stay up late, my condition becomes bad.
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