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I agree with Cathy. Because fairy tales can give positive impact to children.For example main characters in fairy tales are kind, brave, adventurous and pure.If children read fairy tales they can learn like these things.

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Hello, Henry! That's a great idea. 

Reading fairy tales can serve as a valuable learning experience for children, helping them understand and appreciate these virtues in an engaging way.

~ Teacher Maxine 


I agree with Cathy. 

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I share Cathy's perspective.

Because fairy tales can give positive impact to children.

>> Because fairy tales can have a positive impact on children.

For example main characters in fairy tales are kind, brave, adventurous and pure.

>> For example, the main characters in fairy tales are kind, brave, adventurous, and pure.

If children read fairy tales they can learn like these things.

>> If children read fairy tales, they can learn about these qualities.

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