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Who is your real life superhero?

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I think my real life superhero is YouTuber named Mr.Beast. The first reason is that he has donated to thousands of people that he has never seen so far. The second reason is that he¡¯s made one hundred wells in Africa and that made many Africans don¡¯t need to drink so dirty water. Lastly, he said he has dream to make a severe disease extinct like Edward Jenner. I feel like these things are so impressive. When I grow up I would like to help poor people and contribute to the world as well.

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I think my real life superhero is YouTuber named Mr.Beast. The first reason is that he has donated to thousands of people that he has never seen so far. The second reason is that he¡¯s made one hundred wells in Africa and that made many Africans don¡¯t need to drink so dirty water. Lastly, he said he has dream to make a severe disease extinct like Edward Jenner. I feel like these things are so impressive. When I grow up I would like to help poor people and contribute to the world as well.

>> I think my real life superhero is a YouTuber named Mr.Beast. The first reason is that he has donated money to thousands of people that he has never seen or knew. The second reason is that he¡¯s made one hundred wells in Africa and that made them avoid drinking contaminated water. Lastly, he said he had a dream to eliminate a severe disease to extinction like what Edward Jenner did. I feel like these things are so impressive. When I grow up I would like to help poor people and contribute to the world as well.



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