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Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?

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I think people want to improve their English because it is considered an international language used in world.
Additionally, they seem interested in English due to its significant role in various fields such as business, education, and travel.
Also, English is one of the useful language in the internet or SNS,
So I think Many people can be accept more easiler to information that is well english.
Additionally, Increasing English provides more opportunities to confidently engage in international communication,
and I believe this is also one of the reasons why people strive to improve their English skills.

I also want to improve my English skills for self-improvement. and while attending university,
I wanted to improve my English by studying abroad as an exchange student,
but due to the outbreak of COVID-19, I couldn't go overseas at all.
I think improving English allows me to travel to various countries and have diverse experiences.

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Thank you for this Eunice!

I think people want to improve their English because it is considered an international language used in world.
>>> I think people want to improve their English because it is considered an international language used in the world.  
Additionally, they seem interested in English due to its significant role in various fields such as business, education, and travel.
>>> correct  
Also, English is one of the useful language in the internet or SNS,
>>> Also, English is one of the useful languages in the internet or SNS. 
So I think Many people can be accept more easiler to information that is well english.
>>>  So I think many people can be accept information in English easier. 
Additionally, Increasing English provides more opportunities to confidently engage in international communication,
>>>   correct
and I believe this is also one of the reasons why people strive to improve their English skills.
>>> correct  
I also want to improve my English skills for self-improvement. 
>>> correct
And while attending university, I wanted to improve my English by studying abroad as an exchange student,
>>> correct   
But due to the outbreak of COVID-19, I couldn't go overseas at all.
>>>  correct
I think improving English allows me to travel to various countries and have diverse experiences.
>>> correct  
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