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Q: What is your favorite comedy movie and why?

A: My favorite comedy movie title is 'white quicks'. This movie's story is that two police is qualified Bodyguard for tow rich girls. But one girl is hurt her face because of car accident So she don't want to go party to have hurt face. But the party so precious of them so the two men go to the party to make up like girls. It is so funny to me that two police men act like a girl.
I like this comedy movie because this movie theme is so creativity i think

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I must agree with you, Ye Ji! I watched its trailer because of your answer, and it looked hilarious. Thank you for your fast response.
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Q: What is your favorite comedy movie and why?
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A: My favorite comedy movie title is 'white quicks'. 
>> My favorite comedy movie title is White Chicks. 
This movie's story is that two police is qualified Bodyguard for tow rich girls. 
>> This movie story is about the two policemen who are qualified to be bodyguards for two rich girls. 
But one girl is hurt her face because of car accident So she don't want to go party to have hurt face. 
>> However, one girl hurts her face because of a car accident, so she doesn't want to go party with that hurt face.
But the party so precious of them so the two men go to the party to make up like girls. 
>> Nonetheless, the party was so precious to them, so the two policemen go to the party and disguised themselves like girls. 
It is so funny to me that two police men act like a girl.
>> It is so funny to me that these two policemen act like a girl.
I like this comedy movie because this movie theme is so creativity i think
>> I like this comedy movie because its theme is so creative.
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