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I\'m not a picky eater.

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I'm not a picky eater.
So, last weekend I ate a lot of foods.
First, I had a barbecue party with beers.
And, I ate raw fish.
Last, I ate seasoned chicken.
In Korea, there is a word called 'À°ÇØ°ø', 'land, sea, and air', which is a simple expression of the world's food.
I ate all of these words in two days, including pork, fish, and beef.
So, I had happy days.

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Hi,Min A! Well, I'm not a fussy eater too, andI bet this is pretty good for both of us because we can enjoy diverse kinds of food. Speaking of food, I'm happy to know that you've enjoyed a lot of it during the weekend. Thank you for doing your composition. Keep practicing!
~~T. Jenna

I'm not a picky eater.
Correct, or
>>I'm not a fussy eater.

So, last weekend I ate a lot of foods.
>>So, last weekend, I relished trying many different kinds of food.
First, I had a barbecue party with beers.
Correct, or
>>
First, I enjoyed a barbecue party with beers.
And, I ate raw fish.
Correct, or
>> In addition, I savored raw fish.

Last, I ate seasoned chicken.
Correct, or
>>
Finally, I dug into seasoned chicken.
In Korea, there is a word called 'À°ÇØ°ø', 'land, sea, and air', which is a simple expression of the world's food.
>>In Korea, there is a word 'À°ÇØ°ø', meaning land, sea, and air, which is a simple expression of the world's food.
I ate all of these words in two days, including pork, fish, and beef.
>>I ate all these foods in two days, including pork, fish, and beef.
So, I had happy days.
Correct, or
>>Hence, I had a whale of a time.
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