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The best appointment

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The best appointment I've ever had was the interview meeting with company that I'm working at now.
By accomplishing the interview well, I've been achieving a lot of performances in my strategy team until now.
Let me remind the interview, even if the interview was gone on by online because of Covid-19, I was really nervous to the last minute.
The interview was started with my prepared presentation materials and interviewers asked some free questions to me.
While I respond from the questions, I was entirely immersed in the moment and spoke fluently.
By this way, I believe the best appointment is happened when we make positive result in the situation.

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Hi, Yu Jin!
Thank you so much for sharing your composition. I could clearly picture your interview through your vivid descriptions - it sounds like you absolutely nailed it! Anyway, 
I completely agree with your thoughts on best appointments. When they lead to fruitful outcomes, it truly makes them all the more worthwhile.
~~T. Jenna

The best appointment I've ever had was the interview meeting with company that I'm working at now.
>>The best appointment I've ever had was my interview with the company I'm working at now.
or
>>My interview with the company I'm working at now stands out as the best appointment I've ever had.
By accomplishing the interview well, I've been achieving a lot of performances in my strategy team until now.
>> Since performing well in my interview, I've consistently delivered strong results in my role on the strategy team.
Let me remind the interview, even if the interview was gone on by online because of Covid-19, I was really nervous to the last minute.
>>I clearly remember that even though the interview was conducted online due to Covid-19, I was still very nervous until the very end.
The interview was started with my prepared presentation materials and interviewers asked some free questions to me.
>>The interview started with my prepared presentation materials, and the interviewers asked me some questions.
While I respond from the questions, I was entirely immersed in the moment and spoke fluently.
>>While I responded to the questions,  I was entirely immersed in the moment and spoke fluently.
By this way, I believe the best appointment is happened when we make positive result in the situation.
>> Such being the case, I believe that the best appointments are those that lead to positive results. or Given this, I believe that the best appointments happen when we achieve positive outcomes from it.
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