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I think it's safe to think alone and avoid topics that can be heard sensitively depending on the person.
Nowadays, there are people who think that they win if they push their personal thoughts, so it's dangerous to share their opinions carelessly.
If you want to talk and share your opinions, I think it would be better to have a conversation to avoid sensitive topics between close friends.

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Hi Da Hye, 

It's wise to be mindful of sensitive topics, especially given the diversity of opinions and perspectives. Choosing when and where to share thoughts is a thoughtful approach, and having discussions with close friends can create a more comfortable environment for sharing. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I think it's safe to think alone and avoid topics that can be heard sensitively depending on the person. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I believe it's safer to reflect on one's thoughts individually and steer clear of topics that might be perceived sensitively based on individual perspectives. 

Nowadays, there are people who think that they win if they push their personal thoughts, so it's dangerous to share their opinions carelessly. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>In today's world, some believe they succeed by forcefully asserting their personal views, making it risky to casually share opinions. 

If you want to talk and share your opinions, I think it would be better to have a conversation to avoid sensitive topics between close friends. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>If you want to talk and share opinions, it's better to engage in a conversation, steering clear of sensitive topics, especially among close friends. 

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