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I think it's good to work only half a day. I think it's good to use the remaining half day to do other things or do self-development or hobbies.

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Good morning, Eliana,
For us workers, it is really ideal to work half day. Who wouldn't like that, right? but this kind of system only works for freelance workers. 
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~

I think it's good to work only half a day.
>>> CORRECT!

I think it's good to use the remaining half day to do other things or do self-development or hobbies.
>>> CORRECT!
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