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What do you think the world will be like if all people speak just one language?

작성자: 최*정
2024-01-08 1362

회원님의 영작문

When there are no language barriers, communication becomes much simpler and more efficient.
This has advantages when we traveling making it much easier in everyday interactions, business dealings, and international relations.
Moreover, it allows people from diverse cultures and backgrounds to create deeper connections and also provides economic benefits.

When everyone speaks the same language, learning becomes more accessible and standardized.
This means that even when we have exams, there would be no need to study various languages.
and it is expected to improve global educational equality.

However, there are also many disadvantage.
In a world with one language, there might be loss of linguistic diversity and the richness that different languages
If various languages disappear, It could be lost about the unique cultural characteristics and history
Additionally, It could be lost about artistic works associated with each language could also be lost.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Eunice! Very well said.

When there are no language barriers, communication becomes much simpler and more efficient.
>>> correct
This has advantages when we traveling making it much easier in everyday interactions, business dealings, and international relations.
>>> This has advantages when we are traveling, making it much easier in everyday interactions, business dealings, and international relations.
Moreover, it allows people from diverse cultures and backgrounds to create deeper connections and also provides economic benefits.
>>>  correct
When everyone speaks the same language, learning becomes more accessible and standardized.
>>>  correct
This means that even when we have exams, there would be no need to study various languages, and it is expected to improve global educational equality.
>>>  correct
However, there are also many disadvantages.
>>>  correct 
In a world with one language, there might be loss of linguistic diversity and the richness that different languages
>>> In a world with one language, there might be a loss of linguistic diversity and the richness that different languages has to offer.
If various languages disappear, It could be lost about the unique cultural characteristics and history
>>> If various languages disappear, it could be a loss of the unique cultural characteristics and history.
Additionally, It could be lost about artistic works associated with each language could also be lost.
>>> Additionally, the artistic works associated with each language could also be lost.
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