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Which one is easier, to be a follower or a leader?

작성자: 이*현
2024-01-05 1181

회원님의 영작문

When I was younger, I think follower is better than leader.
Because, when we following to leader we can think and act anything(don’t need)
and also we don’t have any responsibility.
It makes me comfort and easy.
But Now, change my opinion.
I think leader is better than follower.
Because, it is makes me more active and I can learn responsibility for myself.
also I have to think myself for do it.
and more helpful development of myself.
these day, a lot of people they don’t want to responsibility themselves.
so, when they do something or threat someone just enjoy and rightly.
I think it is no good for our society. Anyway so I think leader is better than follower.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Hari!
You are really diligent about finishing all of your homework. ~ Thank you^__^
For me, being a follower is easier since, as you stated, you will simply wait for commands and will not have to think about the team. At the same time, leadership experience can help you understand how to take responsibility effectively. Nevertheless, it is better to experience both things. In that way, you will understand each other's point of view. 
-Chammy
When I was younger, I think follower is better than leader.
>>When I was younger, I thought being a follower was better than being a leader.
Because, when we following to leader we can think and act anything(don’t need)
>> Because, when we follow a leader we can think and act anything.
And also we don’t have any responsibility.
>>Correct
It makes me comfort and easy.
>>It makes things comfortable and easy.
But Now, change my opinion.
>>But I've changed my mind.
I think leader is better than follower.
>>I think being a leader is better than being a follower.
Because, it is makes me more active and I can learn responsibility for myself.
>>Because it makes me more active and take responsibility for myself.
also I have to think myself for do it. and more helpful development of myself.
>> I also have to think about it personally and can help myself develop.
these day, a lot of people they don’t want to responsibility themselves.
>> These days, a lot of people don’t want to take responsibility.
so, when they do something or threat someone just enjoy and rightly.
>> So, when they do something or threaten someone, they simply enjoy it.
I think it is no good for our society. Anyway so I think leader is better than follower.
>>I think it is not good for our society. So, I think being a leader is better than being a follower.


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