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What is your favorite subject in school? Why do you like that subject?

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My favorite subject is P.E, Art, Science and English.
The P.E is very fun.
And Art is also fun too.
And also Sciece is also fun and exciting.
And lastly English is do game.
These things are I like P.E, Art, Science and English.

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Good day, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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My favorite subject is P.E, Art, Science and English.
>> My favorite subjects are P.E, Arts, Science, and English.
The P.E is very fun.
>> P.E is very fun.
And Art is also fun too.
>>  Arts is fun, too.
And also Sciece is also fun and exciting.
>> Science is also fun and exciting.
And lastly English is do game.
>> Lastly, we do games in English class.
These things are I like P.E, Art, Science and English.
>> The subjects I like are I like P.E, Art, Science and English.

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