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i like 4season of our country because I can see different stuff when each other season.
Especially in spring, cherry blossoms bloom and in fall, maple leaves are falling.
it¡¯s good sound of stepping on maple leaves.
But spring and fall are getting shorter, summer and winter getting longer these days.
The reason is global warming maybe.
l also like summer and winter however it¡¯s so sad.

And i like summer more then winter because I fell the cold more then heat.
when winter, I¡®m getting lazy.. I don¡¯t like how I look.
In summer, We can see green stuff like tree or natures.
I like that :) How about you?

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Hi Su! Thank you for giving the time and effort to do this. It would be nice to hear about what other things you do during the different seasons. Anyway keep it up!
--Teacher Ryka^^
i like 4season of our country because I can see different stuff when each other season.
>> I like all four seasons in my country because I can experience different things in every season.
Especially in spring, cherry blossoms bloom and in fall, maple leaves are falling.
>> Especially in Spring, the cherry blossoms bloom while during fall, the maple leaves fall from the trees.
it¡¯s good sound of stepping on maple leaves.
>> It sounds good every time I step on maple leaves.
But spring and fall are getting shorter, summer and winter getting longer these days.
>> But these days, Spring and Fall are getting shorter while Summer and Winter are getting longer.
The reason is global warming maybe.
>> Maybe the reason is global warming.
l also like summer and winter however it¡¯s so sad.
>> I also like Summer and Winter however it makes me sad.

And i like summer more then winter because I fell the cold more then heat.
>> To be honest, I prefer Summer more than Winter because I feel colder these days.
when winter, I¡®m getting lazy.. I don¡¯t like how I look.
>> During Winter, I feel lazier and I don't like the way I look.
In summer, We can see green stuff like tree or natures.
>> During Summer, we can see green stuff like trees or nature.
I like that :) How about you?
>> CORRECT.
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