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Do you think working during the holidays affects your overall holiday experience positively or negat

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I think working during the holidays is very negatively.
Because If I work on holidays, I can't spent the time with my friends or familys,
especially when I work in restaurant or buffet, physically hard because there are so many people,
So, the concept of the holiday is disappears due to the inability to enjoy the holiday properly.


But There is also positively.
Although the holiday experience may not be enough, If I working during the holidays in korea,
I think this is a positive part because I can get extra pay.
And after the work, I able to spend time with my colleagues who worked together,
it can relieve some stres and hardship.

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Good day, Choi Eun Jeong!

Your perspective on working during holidays resonates with the challenges and positives it brings. Balancing time with family and friends is essential, but the additional pay and the chance to unwind with colleagues afterward indeed offer valuable aspects to the experience. I appreciate your thoughtful reflection on the dynamics of working during holidays.

I think working during the holidays is very negatively.

>> I think working during the holidays has a very negative impact.
Because If I work on holidays, I can't spent the time with my friends or familys, especially when I work in restaurant or buffet, physically hard because there are so many people,

>> Because if I work on holidays, I can't spend time with my friends or family, especially when I work in a restaurant or buffet. It's physically hard because there are so many people.
So, the concept of the holiday is disappears due to the inability to enjoy the holiday properly.
>> Therefore, the concept of the holiday disappears due to the inability to enjoy it properly.
But There is also positively.

>> But there is also a positive aspect.
Although the holiday experience may not be enough, If I working during the holidays in korea,

>> Although the holiday experience may not be enough, if I work during the holidays in Korea.

I think this is a positive part because I can get extra pay.

>> I think this is a positive part because I can get extra pay.
And after the work, I able to spend time with my colleagues who worked together, it can relieve some stres and hardship.

>> After work, I am able to spend time with my colleagues who worked together, which can relieve some stress and hardship.

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