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Traditional ways of welcoming the New Year in my family.

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In case of my family, we useually eat Tteokguk, a traditional Korean dish. It¡¯s main ingredient is sliced rice cake. After we eat Tteokguk my family go to grandparent¡¯s house to do a good looking greeting. Then we spend our time watching movie or go to Catholic church to celebrate a mass about New Year since I am a Roman Catholic.

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Hi, Lune! 

I just wanna wish you a Happy New Year! May it be filled with new adventures and good furtunes. 

- Kristine ^^ 

In case of my family, we useually eat Tteokguk, a traditional Korean dish. 
>> My family often enjoys the traditional Korean cuisine tteokguk. 
It¡¯s main ingredient is sliced rice cake. 
>> Correct.
After we eat Tteokguk my family go to grandparent¡¯s house to do a good looking greeting. 
>> My family and I go to my grandparents' house to exchange formal greetings after eating tteokguk. 
Then we spend our time watching movie or go to Catholic church to celebrate a mass about New Year since I am a Roman Catholic.
>> We then celebrate the New Year by watching movies or attending mass at the Catholic church since I am a Roman Catholic.
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