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Are there any specific foods or drinks you believe contribute to your overall well-being?

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I can't think of much, but I think diet food or super food is contributing to well-being.
Many people try dieting, so they think it's effective or they share foods that have been effective in dieting, leading the overall trend.
Super foods are similar to this trend, but I think it becomes a food that many people pay attention to as famous researchers or universities' papers are promoted to be effective in health by gaining public confidence.

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Hi, Yun! I cannot agree with you more. Thanks for this! See you on Friday! ^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Are there any specific foods or drinks you believe contribute to your overall well-being? 
I can't think of much, but I think diet food or super food is contributing to well-being.
>> Correct
>> OR: I can't think of much, but I believe that diet foods or superfoods contribute to well-being.
Many people try dieting, so they think it's effective or they share foods that have been effective in dieting, leading the overall trend.
>> Correct
>> OR: Many people try dieting, thinking it's effective, and they share foods that have proven to be effective in their diets, leading to an overall trend.
Super foods are similar to this trend, but I think it becomes a food that many people pay attention to as famous researchers or universities' papers are promoted to be effective in health by gaining public confidence. 
>> Correct
>> OR: Superfoods are similar to this trend, but I believe they become foods that many people pay attention to, as papers from famous researchers or universities are promoted as effective for health, gaining public confidence.
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