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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Appreciation.

작성자: 김*국
2023-12-25 772

회원님의 영작문

Dear Camille.

Thank you for your teaching for a long time. I have studied with you since March 2021. Talking with you was the biggest pleasure. I felt afraid to speak in English the first time, but now I am proud to speak with native speakers anywhere. Anyhow, through the class with you for 2 and half years, I decided to challenge being a tour guide as my second life. It was impossible to challenge in explain in English for foreign tourists Provided that there was no confidence through your class. Anyhow, we have a way to keep in touch through Instagram and e-mail. I am looking forward to sending my good results in the tour guide exam this time next year and being your official tour guider when you visit my country someday. It is going to be free of course. You are always a kind, pretty, and energetic teacher who loves my country. I want to thank you for your excellent teaching skills again. Always be happy and hope to meet a good boyfriend.

Best regards. Mandeep.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Dear Camille.

Thank you for your teaching for a long time. I have studied with you since March 2021. Talking with you was the biggest pleasure. I felt afraid to speak in English the first time, but now I am proud to speak with native speakers anywhere. Anyhow, through the class with you for 2 and half years, I decided to challenge being a tour guide as my second life. It was impossible to challenge in explain in English for foreign tourists Provided that there was no confidence through your class. Anyhow, we have a way to keep in touch through Instagram and e-mail. I am looking forward to sending my good results in the tour guide exam this time next year and being your official tour guider when you visit my country someday. It is going to be free of course. You are always a kind, pretty, and energetic teacher who loves my country. I want to thank you for your excellent teaching skills again. Always be happy and hope to meet a good boyfriend.

Best regards. Mandeep.

Hi Sir Mandeep!

Thank you so much for your deep appreciation, and it was indeed a great time teaching you. :)
I hope I was able to help you boost your self-confidence, and with that, I am hoping for your success in the future. Being a tourist guide is one of your goals for the coming year, and I am in full support. I am rooting for your success, and I am hoping that you would also help a lot of people through your English-speaking skills.
In the future, I hope you could also boost other people's confidence in speaking the English language, and encourage them just as how I encouraged you. I believe in you. :)

It has been a great time, Sir Mandeep! I hope I could visit South Korea soon. :) I promise to keep in touch with you Sir Mandeep! :)

With appreciation,
Camille
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