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I usually celebrate Christmas with my boyfriend. He and I don't like the place which is too crowded, so 2 years ago, we had decided to spend a time at home. We cooked by ourselves and ate some food and wine at home. Before Christmas, we bought 2 boxes of puzzle and we compete about who will finish first in Christmas. It was not special but funny. That memory makes me happy.

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Hello, Dami!

Pardon me for giving back the grammar suggestions just this time. By now, I have attended a yearend party and a wedding. Thank you for your understanding.

In Korea, it is common for couples to be together during Christmas, I suppose. Since there is no work this day, what better way to spend it but with someone you love. Competing over putting all the pieces of the puzzle together sounds fun and exciting!

Anyway, below are your correct sentences as well s those that contain some grammar suggestions about simple past tense and pluralization. Please master these rules and apply them in your speech and in writing. Well done!

See you next week!

-T. Donna~

I usually celebrate Christmas with my boyfriend. 
>> Correct!

He and I don't like the place which is too crowded, so 2 years ago, we had decided to spend a time at home. 
>> He and I don't like the place which is too crowded, so 2 years ago, we had decided to spend time at home. 

We cooked by ourselves and ate some food and wine at home. 
>> We cooked by ourselves and ate some food and had wine at home. 

Before Christmas, we bought 2 boxes of puzzle and we compete about who will finish first in Christmas. 
>> Before Christmas, we bought 2 boxes of puzzles and we competed about who will finish first on Christmas. 

It was not special but funny. 
>> Correct!

That memory makes me happy.
>> Correct!
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