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What is the best job in your country?

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Absolutely as far as I'm concerned, lawyer, prosecutor, judge, and doctor. Most parents in Korea think those jobs are the best. So, they tend to push their child studying hard to become that. Fortunately, my parents didn't do that to me. I believe I got blessed of parents. Another thing I guess is a pilot. It looks cool and making much money. But, I know how much it will cost to being a pilot.

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Absolutely as far as I'm concerned, lawyer, prosecutor, judge, and doctor. 
>> Absolutely as far as I'm concerned, the best careers are lawyer, prosecutor, judge, and doctor. 
Most parents in Korea think those jobs are the best. 
>> CORRECT!
So, they tend to push their child studying hard to become that. 
>> CORRECT!
Fortunately, my parents didn't do that to me. 
>> CORRECT!
I believe I got blessed of parents. 
>> I believe I got blessed with supportive parents. 
Another thing I guess is a pilot. 
>> CORRECT!
It looks cool and making much money. 
>> CORRECT!
But, I know how much it will cost to being a pilot.
>> But, I know how much it will cost being a pilot.

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