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What comes to mind whenever you hear the expression \"confidence\"?

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The passonate woman who seems good at sports comes to my mind. The reason why I thought especially woman, for my opinion, is because of Disney cartoons I watched on my childhood. Of course I liked all of the princesses but I loved Jasmine and Mulan who is brave and confidence. I think that memory impacted for me to like confidence, girl-crush woman.

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Good evening, Ye Jin!
(^___^)

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework.

Confidence makes us feel prepared for the challenges of life.
Success comes from believing in yourself and having faith in your talents. Confidence provides courage, resilience, motivation, and faith in one's own ability to succeed. The best method to gain confidence is to acquire skills and training that will serve as the foundation for your abilities and achievements.

See you tomorrow. ^-^

__T. Mayleen :)


The passonate woman who seems good at sports comes to my mind.
>>> A passionate woman who seems to be good at sports comes to mind.
The reason why I thought especially woman, for my opinion, is because of Disney cartoons I watched on my childhood.
>>> The Disney cartoons I grew up watching, in my opinion, were the main influence on my thinking, particularly with regard to women.
Of course I liked all of the princesses but I loved Jasmine and Mulan who is brave and confidence.
>>> Of course, I liked all of the princesses, but I loved Jasmine and Mulan, who are brave and confident.
I think that memory impacted for me to like confidence, girl-crush woman.
>>> I think that memory impacted my confidence as a girl-crush woman.
>>> OR: That memory, I believe, affected my self-confidence as a girl crush woman.

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