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First, the tourism in the near future will be likely to have a tendency of revenge travel. People want to make up for the lost trips during Covid or some wars. After that revenge travel,tourism in the future will be the largest industry worldwide. And in the distant future, space travel and travel to other planets may be an important topic.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework. Revenge travel is indeed popular nowadays, especially during long holidays. That's why, instead of following the tradition of visiting their ancestors or having family gatherings, a lot of people prefer to travel. I agree as well that in the distant future, space travel might be possible, especially with the advancement of technology.
-T. Caitlyn
First, the tourism in the near future will be likely to have a tendency of revenge travel. 
>> First, tourism in the near future is likely to exhibit a tendency toward revenge travel.
People want to make up for the lost trips during Covid or some wars. 
>> People want to make up for the trips they lost during Covid or some wars.
After that revenge travel,tourism in the future will be the largest industry worldwide. 
>> After this revenge travel trend, tourism in the future is expected to become the largest industry worldwide.
And in the distant future, space travel and travel to other planets may be an important topic.
>> CORRECT

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