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What was the worst kind of fake news you ever read? Can you tell me about it?

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These days, there are too many fake news, especially in web site like a Youtube.
They make a fake news to get higher viewer theirs news or videos.
In Korea, there are fake news that it said someone like celebrity is dead, but actually the men or women is not dead.

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These days, there are too many fake news, especially in web site like a Youtube.
>> These days, there is a lot of fake news spreading, especially on websites like YouTube. 

They make a fake news to get higher viewer theirs news or videos.
>>  They make fake news to get more views on their news or videos.

In Korea, there are fake news that it said someone like celebrity is dead, but actually the men or women is not dead.
>> In Korea, there was fake news that said someone like a celebrity was dead, but the truth was that he or she was just doing fine. 
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