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What comes to your mind whenever you hear the word \'chance\'?

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Every chance should be careful but I always think it is better to choose "do" than "not do". Because it is more regretful when I do not something. Chance doesn't come whenever I want.

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Good evening, Hyebhin!
(^__^)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
When you grasp something, such as a chance or an opportunity, or grab at it, you eagerly take advantage of it.
Opportunity only comes around once. You never know when you'll get another chance. I don't always agree with that statement, but it's what we've always been told. We are led to believe that if we make one decision over another at one point in time, we may never receive that chance again.

Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


Every chance should be careful but I always think it is better to choose "do" than "not do".
>>> Every chance should be taken carefully, but I always think it is better to do than not to do.
Because it is more regretful when I do not something.
>>> It's because it is more regretful when I do not do something.
Chance doesn't come whenever I want.
>>> A chance doesn't simply come whenever I want.
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