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If you were given a chance what would you choose, to change something in the past or to see the futu

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2023-12-18 533

회원님의 영작문

Chammy, I was so glad and happy to talk with you about my story last Saturday and also sad that you had a bad day with your shopping.
And I really like your action as if my interview is one of your business as well.
Thank you so much, and this is the last chance to submit the homework because I already used all of the chances before my interview.
As you know I submitted twice a day for practicing English.
Our class is getting over so I am so sad.

If you were given a chance what would you choose, to change something in the past or to see the future?
Actually I would choose to see the future if I had a chance.
I usually did my best even though I had a lot of time to be failed such as joining in famous university , trying many kinds of exams.
So there was nothing to be regreted.
But I really wonder how I look like in the future and how long my tasks last in the hotel.
The most thing I really wonder is wether I passed for the certificate as I expected.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han!
I was thinking about what to write here, but it felt like I was writing a farewell speech while trying to create my message, lol. But, to be honest, I am grateful for the opportunity to be a part of your learning. I feel happy to have met someone so appreciative as you! Regarding the interview, I am happy that you are optimistic about it, and I wish you success. ^___^
-Chammy
Chammy, I was so glad and happy to talk with you about my story last Saturday and also sad that you had a bad day with your shopping.
>>Chammy, I was so glad to talk with you about my story last Saturday and also sad that you had a bad day with your shopping.
And I really like your action as if my interview is one of your business as well.
>>And I really like your action as if my interview is one of your businesses as well.
Thank you so much, and this is the last chance to submit the homework because I already used all of the chances before my interview.
>>Thank you so much! This is the last chance to submit the homework because I already used all of the chances before my interview.
As you know I submitted twice a day for practicing English.
>> As you know I submitted twice a day to practice English.
Our class is getting over so I am so sad.
>>Correct
Actually I would choose to see the future if I had a chance.
>>Actually, I would choose to see the future if I had a chance.
I usually did my best even though I had a lot of time to be failed such as joining in famous university , trying many kinds of exams.
>>I usually did my best even though I failed a lot of times such as joining in famous university, and trying many kinds of exams.
So there was nothing to be regreted.
>>So there was nothing to be regretted.
But I really wonder how I look like in the future and how long my tasks last in the hotel.
>>But I really wonder what I look like in the future and how long my tasks last in the hotel.
The most thing I really wonder is wether I passed for the certificate as I expected.
>>The thing I really wonder the most about is whether I passed the certificate as I expected.
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