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When I go shopping for clothes, I appreciate it when people tell me the truth, such as whether the clothes fit me or don't fit me.

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Happy Tuesday, Eliana!
Shopping is therapeutic for many people, it would reallly be nice is the sales person would help you choosing an item by giving honest insights. Some do not, they just focus on the sales.
Have a happy day!
Aki~

When I go shopping for clothes, I appreciate it when people tell me the truth, such as whether the clothes fit me or don't fit me.
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