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If you were to work in one of the world\'s most famous hotels, where would it be?

작성자: 정*환
2023-12-15 1255

회원님의 영작문

I imagined that your question was in actual interview.
That made me answer right away and I checked how well I answered.
Actually, I am a confident about personal questions.
I realized there are no correct answers for the personal questions. Just saying my opinion would be enough.
When I got the personal questions in the actual interviews before, I wasn't able to answer perfectly because of my terrible English.
Now you made my English better and speak confidently. Thank you Chammy. I will send the message with good news as soon as I got the interview.


If I were in the situation, I would like to work in F&B department.
Because I have work in F&B department for more than 15 years, I think I am well qualified work as a F&B department employee.
But I have a chance to change another department, it could be a front desk for my challenge.
I like interacting with customers ,so if I worked as front desk employee, I can enjoy working and earning money as well.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello,Han!
Hmmm.... I suppose you didn't get the question accurately. ^_^") Your answer was good but did not meet the question, you were supposed to give the name of a famous hotel that you'd like to work in. Hehe~ Maybe, if it happened in reality, the interviewer might just ask it again as a follow-up question. Just imagine that you are just going to attend our class tomorrow so you can be more comfortable. Hahaha... 
-Chammy
I imagined that your question was in actual interview.
>> I imagined your question was in an actual interview.
That made me answer right away and I checked how well I answered.
>>Correct
Actually, I am a confident about personal questions.
>>Actually, I am confident about personal questions.
I realized there are no correct answers for the personal questions. Just saying my opinion would be enough.
>>I realize there are no correct answers to personal questions. Just saying my opinion would be enough.
When I got the personal questions in the actual interviews before, I wasn't able to answer perfectly because of my terrible English.
>>Correct
Now you made my English better and speak confidently. Thank you Chammy. I will send the message with good news as soon as I got the interview.
>>Now you made my English better and speak confidently. Thank you Chammy. I will send the message with good news as soon as I get the interview.
If I were in the situation, I would like to work in F&B department.
>> If I were in the situation, I would like to work in the F&B department.
Because I have work in F&B department for more than 15 years, I think I am well qualified work as a F&B department employee.
>>Because I have been working in the F&B department for more than 15 years, I think I am well qualified to work as an F&B department employee.
But I have a chance to change another department, it could be a front desk for my challenge.
>>But if I have the chance to change to another department, it could be at the front desk for my challenge.
I like interacting with customers ,so if I worked as front desk employee, I can enjoy working and earning money as well.
>>I like interacting with customers, so if I worked as a front desk employee, I would enjoy working and earning money as well.
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