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HI Maxine theacher!
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Teacher Maxine!
I prepared this so So you can fix the part on Excel 1
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prepared this so that you can fix the part in Excel 1.
You can fix the part in the yellow compartment
>> You may fix the part in the yellow compartment.
I beg you, you don't have to fix the time right away!
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asking you a favor, but you don't have to do it right away.
You can do whatever you want
>> You can do whatever you want.
thanks you!!
>> Thank you!
The
banks in my country are located in Central part are of city so. It's convenient
for me visit. I Usually go to 국민 bank in Gwangju. the seat in sit 국민 bank is very clean. I have dust allerg
but I didn't have allergic reaction in the KB bank I think their air is so
clean so l think that's the reason why I go there.
>> The
banks in my country are located in the central part of the city, so it's
convenient for me to visit. I usually go to 국민 bank in Gwangju. The seat in sit 국민 bank is very clean. I have a dust allergy,
but I didn't have an allergic reaction in the KB Bank. I think their air is so
clean, so I think that's the reason why I go there.
okay
My favorite bar is 인생맥주 in
hwasun. I particularly enjoy the onion sauce fried potato and 먹태, My absolute favorite. And The long
tables and chairs provide an elegant setting. The friendly and
entertaining staff make every visit enjoyable. I love the bar so much that
I want to go every day.
>> Okay,
my favorite bar is 인생맥주 in Hwasun. I
particularly enjoy the onion sauce fried potato and 먹태, my absolute favorite. And the long tables
and chairs provide an elegant setting. The friendly and entertaining staff make
every visit enjoyable. I love the bar so much that I want to go every day.
I
want to go to 토토즐 in 상무지구. I here that from my friend. she sad we can enjoy that 토토즐. there'er so many handsum guy so we are bukking at night.
>> I
want to go to 토토즐 in 상무지구. I heard that from my friend. She is sad, but
we can enjoy that 토토즐. There are so
many handsome guys, so we often socialize or gather at night.
well,
these day, you know aloms I'm going bars at 인생맥주. The bar's all-wood furniture, including tables, chairs, and
doors, creates a warm and inviting atmosphere. The ambiance makes you feel like
you've stepped into a magical world, perfect for enjoying drinks and good
company. I think particularly love their special thin ice beer, finding it
refreshing and flavorful. The beer pairs perfectly with their delicious French
fries, making for a satisfying experience. so I love there are reson
>>
Well, these days, you know, I'm going to bars at 인생맥주. The bar's all-wood furniture, including
tables, chairs, and doors, creates a warm and inviting atmosphere. The ambiance
makes you feel like you've stepped into a magical world, perfect for enjoying
drinks and good company. I particularly love their special thin ice beer,
finding it refreshing and flavorful. The beer pairs perfectly with their
delicious French fries, making a satisfying experience. Hence, I love it for
these reasons.
My
favorite beachs are 돌산 beach in 여수 with my friends. recently when I been to
there sea view It was so wonderfull. There is a line the sea side cafes. we
have many picture so I don't forgot this time and we meet to other
friend so It's long time no see her. I like We're going to play
>> My
favorite beaches are 돌산 beach in 여수 with my friends. Recently, when I was at
their sea view, it was so wonderful. There is a line of seaside cafes. We have
many pictures, so I didn't forget this time, and we met another friend, so it's
been a long time since I saw her. I like that we're going to play.
Okay,
I Tell you about the in near my home of cafe. cafe name is 코히야. I like watched the cafe shop interior. l like coffe and there
having the mood nice so I uselly go to cafe because there interior is cute of
tiny. I think, I go to every single day and It's just conveniently for me
>> Okay,
let me tell you about the cafe near my home. Its name is 코히야. I liked watching the cafe shop interior. I
like coffee, and the mood there is nice, so I usually go to cafes because their
interior is cute and tiny. I think I go there every single day, and it's just
convenient for me.
I
like the most favorit place it's 갈변 beach in 서천 of are 충청남도 because my feeling is realacity of the beach. befor I worked
pamarcy in 서천 so everytime I have many stressde whenever I
go to the company. so almost I go to there when I get the stress. it was of
help to me. there placed to head the ocean a road it's vey beautyful
>> I
like my most favorite place, which is 갈변 Beach in 서천, 충청남도, because of the serene atmosphere it
provides. Before, I worked at a pharmacy in 서천, so I would experience a lot of stress every
time I went to the company. Therefore, whenever I feel stressed, I almost
always go to 갈변 Beach. It has been
quite helpful for me. There is a road leading to the ocean; it's incredibly
beautiful.
well,
I don't often go to concert but recetly I went to the water concert in Deajun.
there shoot me to water It's very fun br. the concert atmosphere was amazing
because there are so laud and energized. we are play the water concert all day
and l like lisen to mucis, l was a hip hop gril
>> Well,
I don't often go to concerts, but recently, I went to a water concert in
Daejeon. They shot water, and it was so much fun! The concert atmosphere was
amazing because it was loud and energized. We played at the water concert all
day, and I like listening to music. I am a hip-hop girl.
I
have a friend, she name is harin. she is very a doable person. I forgot have to
time with her. she have spcial poin to kind so I'm rest mind by her. it's
reason why I like her
>> I
have a friend, her name is Harin. She is a very amiable person. Sometimes, I
forget how to spend time with her, but she has a special way of being kind, and
it puts my mind at ease. That's one of the reasons why I like her.
I
have a childhood friend that I remember. Her name is Shinhye, and she is tall
and pretty. She always tries to prove herself, so much so that there is no one
who doesn't like her. Seeing that, I remember always trying to act like her.
She is now married and has a child. She is currently pregnant. We still meet
and keep in touch. She has become an indispensable and eternal friend to me
>> I
have a childhood friend whom I fondly remember. Her name is Shinhye, and she is
tall and pretty. She has always had a way of proving herself, making it hard
for anyone not to like her. Witnessing her confidence, I used to try to emulate
her. Now, she is married and has a child. She is currently pregnant. Despite
life's changes, we still meet and keep in touch. She has become an
indispensable and eternal friend to me.
My
favorite neighbor is Aunt Lee Soon-i. She lives below our house and always
brings us delicious kimchi whenever something good happens. She is a hard
worker and always gets up early in the morning to feed and water her pets. The
reason I like her is because she is very kind to us. When I was young, she
would take care of me when I was home alone. I was so grateful that Aunt Lee
Soon-i would often step in to take care of me when my parents were busy. This
is why I like her.
>> My
favorite neighbor is Aunt Lee Soon-i. She lives below our house and always
brings us delicious kimchi whenever something good happens. She is a hard
worker, getting up early in the morning to feed and water her pets. The reason
I like her is that she is very kind to us. When I was young, she would take
care of me when I was home alone. I was so grateful that Aunt Lee Soon-i would
often step in to look after me when my parents were busy. This is why I like her.
Koreans
are increasingly interested in street fashion and hip-hop fashion. It is common
to see people in Korea wearing a mix of street fashion and hip-hop fashion. For
example, people in Korea often wear baggy jeans with cropped tops. jogger pants
are a popular choice for both leisure and workwear in Korea. I once got so
hooked on wearing jogger pants that I wore them every day for a week.
>> Koreans are showing a growing interest in
street fashion and hip-hop fashion, with many people in Korea embracing a
combination of these styles. For instance, it's common to see individuals
wearing baggy jeans paired with cropped tops. Jogger pants have become a
popular choice for both leisure and workwear in Korea. I once became so
enamored with jogger pants that I wore them every day for a week.
I
prefer casual looks these days. Because casual looks are versatile enough to be
worn at work, at play, or anywhere in between. I wore a gray sweater and baggy
jeans today. "I really like the pants I'm wearing now. They are
fashionable and comfortable, so I wear them often these days."
>> I
prefer casual looks these days because they are versatile enough to be worn at
work, at play, or anywhere in between. Today, I chose a gray sweater paired
with baggy jeans. I really like the pants I'm wearing now; they are fashionable
and comfortable, so I've been wearing them often recently.
I
wore a gray sweater and baggy jeans today. I really like the pants I'm wearing
now. They are fashionable and comfortable, so I wear them often these days.
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