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What is important, however, is that sometimes side effects and unintended consequences may not be found, depending on the purpose. For example, plastic bags were made to replace paper bags. In other words, although it was developed to reduce environmental pollution, it is now pointed out as the main cause of environmental pollution. Another example is the bomb. The bomb, which was manufactured for the convenience of mining ore, was used as a weapon, contrary to its manufacturing intention, and took many lives.

In conclusion, advances in science and technology are developed for mankind, but scientists must consider it once more and proceed with research because it can lead to unexpected results.

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What is important, however, is that sometimes side effects and unintended consequences may not be found, depending on the purpose.

>>Nevertheless, what is crucial to acknowledge is that unintended consequences and side effects may not always align with the original purpose of scientific advancements. 

For example, plastic bags were made to replace paper bags. 

>>Correct.

In other words, although it was developed to reduce environmental pollution, it is now pointed out as the main cause of environmental pollution.

>>However, they are now identified as a major contributor to environmental pollution. 

Another example is the bomb. 

>>Correct.

The bomb, which was manufactured for the convenience of mining ore, was used as a weapon, contrary to its manufacturing intention, and took many lives.

>>Correct.
In conclusion, advances in science and technology are developed for mankind, but scientists must consider it once more and proceed with research because it can lead to unexpected results.

>>Correct.

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