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What are the advantages of having a routine or schedule?

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If I need to keep going something, Routine make me possible. Like English studying, It is helped to keep going continuously. So I think it is important.

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Even though there are easy words,
I always seem to use difficult words when I speak.

I want to do better. T.T

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Hi, Mun!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. If I need to keep going something, Routine make me possible. 
>>If I need to keep doing something, routine makes it possible. 

2. Like English studying, It is helped to keep going continuously. 
>>Like studying English, it helps me to keep going continuously.

3. So I think it is important.
>>That's why, I think it is important.

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Note: Hi, Mun! Using difficult words in speaking is actually an indication that you are trying your best to do better in English.
Just tell me if it's becoming too difficult in class so that we can make some adjustments. You can do it! 
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