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Do you think it\'s okay to drink rainwater? Why or why not?

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I think it was okay when the past, but it is not okay nowadays. Because of car smoke or factory smoke, it is acid rain.
It may be harmful.

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Hello, Hyebhin!^^

Rainwater has been connected to illness outbreaks and is known to contain bacteria, viruses, parasites, and other potentially harmful substances. Depending on your region, the amount of rain that falls, the time of year, and how you collect and store the rainwater, there may be varying risks associated with drinking rainwater.

Thank you for answering your homework. Have a good weekend!

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I think it was okay when the past, but it is not okay nowadays.
>>> I think it was okay in the past, but it is not okay nowadays.
Because of car smoke or factory smoke, it is acid rain.
>>> Because of car or factory smoke, it becomes acid rain.
It may be harmful.
>>> CORRECT
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