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Social media has highly contributed to public when it comes to accessibility to information.
We can timely recognize specific words and behaviors from people through social media.
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It can make a person improve their actions fastly and show again to public.

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Social media has highly contributed to public when it comes to accessibility to information.

>>Social media has made a significant contribution to public access to information. 
We can timely recognize specific words and behaviors from people through social media.

>>We can promptly become aware of specific words and behaviors exhibited by individuals.

Along the same lines, a person has become to check the reactions of public by just one click in social media.

>>Along the same lines, a person can now have the ability to gauge public reactions with just one click on social media.
It can make a person improve their actions fastly and show again to public.

>>It can make a person improve their actions fastly and present them again to public.


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