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Hi my name is Eunyoung
I'm 27 year old, I'm living in Hwasun from South Korea
I will go to the university next year. for Graduate shcool
so I'am study English to hard
If I'm not good at English but after It's will be okay!
because I'm really so hard that and I started Power English, so I think It was help for me
I love my major beacuse It was very funny to me !!
I think, I'm really brith person and so kind
whenever My friends are say it to me "oh Eunyoun you are really nice person and thank you give up to me"
so I really happy to hear that, the reson why I have many friends

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Hi, Eunyoung!

Nice to meet you! Congrats on planning to go to graduate school next year! Your dedication to learning English is impressive, and I'm sure you'll do great. 

It's awesome that you love your major and your positive, kind nature shines through. No wonder you have many friends! Keep up the fantastic work. Best of luck on your academic journey! 

~ Teacher Maxine ^^


Hi my name is Eunyoung

>> Hi, my name is Eunyoung.


I'm 27 year old, I'm living in Hwasun from South Korea

>> I am 27 years old and currently living in Hwasun, South Korea.


I will go to the university next year. for Graduate school so I'am study English to hard

>> I will be attending graduate school at the university next year, I am studying English diligently.


If I'm not good at English but after It's will be okay!

>> If I'm not good at English now, it will be okay in the future with continuous effort and practice.


because I'm really so hard that and I started Power English, so I think It was help for me

>> Because I'm putting in a lot of effort, and I've started Power English, I believe it will help me improve.


I love my major beacuse It was very funny to me !!

>> I love my major because it is very enjoyable to me!


I think, I'm really brith person and so kind

>> I think I'm a really bright and kind person.


whenever My friends are say it to me "oh Eunyoun you are really nice person and thank you give up to me"

>> Whenever my friends say, "Oh Eunyoung, you are a really nice person, and thank you for being there for me."


so I really happy to hear that, the reson why I have many friends

>> I am really happy to hear that; the reason why I have many friends is because of the positive feedback and appreciation I receive from them.

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