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My tastes for some clothing brands

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When shopping clothes, I prefer local brands. I usually buy some clothes made in Korea. When in other countries, I look for local brands. Sometimes I can feel an uniqueness of those countries with the pattern or colors.
And I also like eco-friendly brands. Last winter, my husband and I bought wool jacket of Patagonia. Even though the prices were a little higher, we were willing to take them. The company Patagonia make their products out of recycled materials. Some of their profits are donated to protecting environment.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
It's nice to know that you support local products, as this can help locals in their livelihoods. Also, it is nice to know that you support a certain cause. That's why, even if products are a bit more expensive, you would buy them because you know it can be helpful to the environment.
- T. Caitlyn
When shopping clothes, I prefer local brands. 
>> CORRECT
I usually buy some clothes made in Korea. 
>> CORRECT
When in other countries, I look for local brands. 
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I can feel an uniqueness of those countries with the pattern or colors.
>> Sometimes I can feel the uniqueness of those countries through the patterns and colors.
And I also like eco-friendly brands. 
>> CORRECT
Last winter, my husband and I bought wool jacket of Patagonia. 
>> Last winter, my husband and I bought a wool jacket from Patagonia.
Even though the prices were a little higher, we were willing to take them. 
>> CORRECT 
The company Patagonia make their products out of recycled materials. 
>> The company Patagonia makes its products out of recycled materials.
Some of their profits are donated to protecting environment.
>> Some of their profits are donated to protecting the environment.
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