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I hope to get certification for firefighting facility next year and apply to university for master's degrees. I wish I would live better.

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Good morning, Thomas!

I am certain that you can make all of these come true. It needs will and discipline and you have all that it takes to be a certified firefighter and to obtain your master's degree.

You will live better and happier by then. So make the best choices today.

Please study my grammar suggestions carefully. You did great!

See you for the last time in class tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

I hope to get certification for firefighting facility next year and apply to university for master's degrees. 
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I wish I would live better.
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