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If i could travel in one country with my friends, i would go to Philippines! I want to visit some places where i can feel the sprit of christmas. And Niki teacher said that Philippines¡¯s Christmas starts from September. (It called ¡®Bar Season¡¯..right?)
and i like singing and dancing Carol. So i wanna see ¡®Caroling¡¯.
and it is not physically far away from Korea. It only takes about 4 hours to get to the Philippines by airplane.

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If i could travel in one country with my friends, i would go to Philippines! I want to visit some places where i can feel the sprit of christmas. 
>> If I could travel in one country with my friends, I would go to the Philippines because I want to visit some places where I can totally feel the spirit of Christmas. 


And Niki teacher said that Philippines¡¯s Christmas starts from September. (It called ¡®Bar Season¡¯..right?)
>> Teacher Nikki said that Christmas in the Philippines starts in September. I guess it's called the "Ber month" season.

and i like singing and dancing Carol. So i wanna see ¡®Caroling¡¯.
>> I would also love to watch actual caroling because I love singing and dancing. 


and it is not physically far away from Korea. 
>> The Philippines is not that far from Korea. 


It only takes about 4 hours to get to the Philippines by airplane.
>> It only takes about 4 hours to get there by airplane. So, visiting it is not a problem at all. 
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