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Do you prefer domestic or overseas trip? Why?

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I prefer overseas trip more than domestic trip.
Because if I going to overseas, I can learn they culture, make a new friends who use another language.
and the characteristics and background of the building are also different from those of Korea,
so it can be a new trip.
also, I want to trip overseas often because I've been to many domestic trips,
so it's a fun, but I want to experience something I haven't done before.

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Thank you for this Eunice. Traveling overseas would definitely bring you new experiences. I hope you get to travel abroad many times. 

I prefer overseas trip more than domestic trip.
>>> I prefer an overseas trip than a domestic trip.
>>> OR:  I prefer overseas trips to domestic trips. 
Because if I going to overseas, I can learn they culture, make a new friends who use another language.
>>> Because if I go overseas, I can learn their culture and make new friends who use another languages.  
and the characteristics and background of the building are also different from those of Korea, so it can be a new trip.
>>>  Moreover, the characteristics and background of the buildings are also different from those of Korea, so it can be a new trip. 
also, I want to trip overseas often because I've been to many domestic trips, so it's a fun, but I want to experience something I haven't done before.
>>>  Also, I want to trip overseas often because I've been to many domestic trips. They were fun but I want to experience something I haven't done before.
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