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I am offended by rude people, but I try to be as kind as possible.

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I am offended by rude people, but I try to be as kind as possible.
I don't want to be rude just because the other person is rude, and I sometimes feel sorry for people who don't usually have anyone to change their attitude.
So I try to do my best and end the day in a good mood.
Because it is not good for anger or sadness to bother me because of others.

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Hi Da Hye, 

Your approach to dealing with rude people is commendable. It's wise not to respond with rudeness and to extend kindness, recognizing that some individuals may not have the support to change their attitude. Your ability to empathize and choose a positive mindset reflects great emotional intelligence. Ending the day in a good mood, free from the impact of negativity, is a valuable practice. Keep up the positive outlook, Da Hye! It's a wonderful way to navigate interactions with others. 

~Teacher Cathy 


I am offended by rude people, but I try to be as kind as possible. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Rude people bother me, but I make an effort to be as kind as I can. 

I don't want to be rude just because the other person is rude, and I sometimes feel sorry for people who don't usually have anyone to change their attitude. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I don't want to respond rudely just because someone else is being rude, and sometimes I feel empathy for those who may not have someone to help them change their attitude. 

So I try to do my best and end the day in a good mood. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Therefore, I make an effort to do my best and finish the day in a positive mood. 

Because it is not good for anger or sadness to bother me because of others. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I avoid letting anger or sadness bother me because of others, as it's not good for my well-being. 

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