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Have you ever disagreed with a manager\'s methods at work? How did you handle the situation?

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회원님의 영작문

I'm sure this question would be very helpful to improve my English and can be real question in actual interview.
I'm pleased to answer your question.^^

Have you ever disagreed with a manager's methods at work? How did you handle the situation?

Sometime my opinion can be different with my manager's one.
I already had the experiences for many times.
In that case, I would explain about my opinion politely and carefully.
If my opinions weren't taken, I would follow the manager's methods.
It is my duty as one of the hotel employees even if manager was wrong.
I would check what was the perfect opinion once I followed his methods.
So communication with my manager is really important to handle it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han!
I would like to leave this part blank because I was speechless! Haha. It looked like you have practiced this question before and your composition perfectly stated your points. It was good that you were still confident to share your opinion and respect the manager's decision. You began and ended your answer well. ^____^
-Chammy
I'm sure this question would be very helpful to improve my English and can be real question in actual interview.
>>I'm sure this question would be very helpful in improving my English and can be a real question in the actual interview.
I'm pleased to answer your question.^^
>>Correct
Have you ever disagreed with a manager's methods at work? How did you handle the situation?
>>Correct
Sometime my opinion can be different with my manager's one.
>> Sometimes my opinion can be different from my manager's.
I already had the experiences for many times.
>>I already had the experience many times.
In that case, I would explain about my opinion politely and carefully.
>>In that case, I would explain my opinion politely and carefully.
If my opinions weren't taken, I would follow the manager's methods.
>>Correct
It is my duty as one of the hotel employees even if manager was wrong.
>>It is my duty as one of the hotel employees even if the manager was wrong.
I would check what was the perfect opinion once I followed his methods.
>> Correct
So communication with my manager is really important to handle it.
>>Correct
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