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영작교정 게시판

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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Tell me anything about hotel membership.

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회원님의 영작문

Chammy. It was nice talking to you this morning.
But I was so sorry to hear that your auto-bike was scamed.
That seller also can get in trouble with same situation someday I believe.
I didn't know what you like as a present. I thought about your nephews and they like it I am sure.
It can not be big enough to make you satisfied ^^
And I always appreciate your help.


Tell me anything about hotel membership.
Hotels have their membership so that the customers can enjoy themselves with many benefits.
Each hotel has their own policies to offer good service such as having meal with the discounted price and free use of their facilities.
Some hotel has their policy that booking rooms are available with membership only.
The membership fees are different among the hotel and must be expensive.
But it can be good cases for customers who will visit the hotel regularly.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello,Han!
Let me share my version. Hotels offer membership to provide advance privileges. Under terms and condition, the customers may get attracted to availing this as some condition applies discounted prices, first to know about the hotel promotion, vouchers, and facility access that is offered only to the exclusive member. Particularly to loyal clients to give them greater benefits when using hotel services and encourage them to stay again. ^___^
Regarding the gift, I was surprised and uncertain if I heard it right during the class. Honestly, whenever you appreciate my work I already feel fulfilled, inspired, and driven to work even harder... Your gift is a bonus and it is highly appreciated. Thinking about it, I even feel more pressured about your interview hahaha.... 
-Chammy
Chammy. It was nice talking to you this morning.
>>Correct
But I was so sorry to hear that your auto-bike was scamed.
>>But I was so sorry to hear that your auto-bike was scammed.
That seller also can get in trouble with same situation someday I believe.
>>That seller will get in trouble with the same situation someday, I believe.
I didn't know what you like as a present. I thought about your nephews and they like it I am sure.
>>Correct
It can not be big enough to make you satisfied ^^
>>Correct
And I always appreciate your help.
>>Correct
Tell me anything about hotel membership.
Hotels have their membership so that the customers can enjoy themselves with many benefits.
>>Correct
Each hotel has their own policies to offer good service such as having meal with the discounted price and free use of their facilities.
>>Each hotel has its own policies to offer good service such as having meals at discounted prices and free use of its facilities.
Some hotel has their policy that booking rooms are available with membership only.
>>Some hotels have a policy that booking rooms are available with membership only.
The membership fees are different among the hotel and must be expensive.
>> The membership fees are different among the hotels and must be expensive.
But it can be good cases for customers who will visit the hotel regularly.
>>Correct
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