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Why does your body need sleep? Have you ever had any problems sleeping?

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I think, sleeping is very important to people to rest of their body and brain.
When they sleep well that reset of their memories and immune system like overcome fatigue.
For me ,when I get stressful,I sometimes have insomnia. However, fortunately It doesn`t last long.

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Hi Young Soon!
Great work today!
I appreciate the effort you put in your work.
This can definitely  make a difference in your development.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think, sleeping is very important to people to rest of their body and brain.
>> I think sleeping is very important for people to let their body and brain rest.
When they sleep well that reset of their memories and immune system like overcome fatigue.
>> When they sleep well, it resets  their mind and immune system to overcome fatigue.
For me ,when I get stressful,I sometimes have insomnia. However, fortunately It doesn`t last long.
>> For me, when I get stressed, I sometimes have insomnia. 
However, fortunately It doesn`t last long.
>> However, fortunately, it doesn't last long.
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