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What do you take into consideration when choosing an accommodation?

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Well you know, I realized myself when I was looking for an accommodation this time. I am a super very picky person to get organized and clean. First, I tend to consider the bathroom whether to be clean or not. And then, I'm looking at the private room. In addition to that, I'm going to ask owner about how noisy it's near my place. So, it took for almost 3 weeks to find an accommodation. :)

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille



Well you know, I realized myself when I was looking for an accommodation this time. 
>> CORRECT!
I am a super very picky person to get organized and clean. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I am quite a really picky person to get organized and clean. 
First, I tend to consider the bathroom whether to be clean or not. 
>> CORRECT!
And then, I'm looking at the private room. 
>> CORRECT!
In addition to that, I'm going to ask owner about how noisy it's near my place. 
>> In addition to that, I'm going to ask the owner about how noisy the nearby places are.
So, it took for almost 3 weeks to find an accommodation. :)
>> CORRECT!

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