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commitment to something

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Commitment appears a dynamic state that an individual invest time and money to something with passion.
Commitment can bring us to awakening world and target differs by each situation.
Parents' commitment to kids is based on unexpected love and it can make kids grow to members of society.
Worker's commitment to work is based on self-esteem and worker will be recognized as a professional by achieving performances.
I believe that showing commitment to something in lifetime is significant to live unregretful life.

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Commitment appears a dynamic state that an individual invest time and money to something with passion.

>>Commitment is a dynamic state where an individual invests time and money into something with passion.
Commitment can bring us to awakening world and target differs by each situation.

>>It can lead to an awakening of purpose, and the target of commitment differs in each situation. 
Parents' commitment to kids is based on unexpected love and it can make kids grow to members of society.

>>For parents, commitment to their children is grounded in profound love, fostering the growth to become responsible members of society.
Worker's commitment to work is based on self-esteem and worker will be recognized as a professional by achieving performances.

>>A worker's commitment to their job is rooted in self-esteem, and professional recognition is achieved through outstanding performance.
I believe that showing commitment to something in lifetime is significant to live unregretful life.

>>I believe that showing commitment to something throughout a lifetime is significant for living a fulfilling and regret-free life.

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