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What\'s difference between facilities and amenities in the hotel?

작성자: 정*환
2023-12-07 1871

회원님의 영작문

Chammy, whenever I took your class, I could realize at least one thing for each day.
I understood the definition about franchise and chain yesterday and also facilities today.
That's why I feel exciting every morning before your class.

What's difference between facilites and amenities in the hotel?
They sound similar but have a difference.
Facilties are the kinds of infrastructures for customers to enjoy themselves such as swimming pool, sauna, gym, restaurants in the hotel.
Amenities are something comfortable while customers are staying in the room such as shampoo, rinse, soup, dryer.

What should we do as a assignments about the hotel industry?
After the corona diease, many people are interested in their health.
So hotel managers should think about adding health programs connected with robot systems.
The robot system will be normalized in the future.
So health robot systems can make customers feel comfortable, and not worried about any diease like corona before.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Han!
During our class, I think I misunderstood your question. I thought we were discussing future hotels based on what you sent me, which is why I encouraged you to add something new to your chosen program, which is health. Because hotels have previously taken health-related actions, I wondered what might happen in the future. If it is just about work assignment I guess talking about health is already okay like what you told me in class since it is very timely after the coronavirus.
 -Chammy
Chammy, whenever I took your class, I could realize at least one thing for each day.
>>Correct
I understood the definition about franchise and chain yesterday and also facilities today.
>>I understood the definition of franchise and chain yesterday and also facilities today.
That's why I feel exciting every morning before your class.
>>That's why I feel excited every morning before your class.
What's difference between facilites and amenities in the hotel?
>>What's the difference between facilities and amenities in the hotel?
They sound similar but have a difference.
>>Correct
Facilities are the kinds of infrastructures for customers to enjoy themselves such as swimming pool, sauna, gym, restaurants in the hotel.
>>Facilities are places or rooms for customers to enjoy and facilitate their needs such as the swimming pool, sauna, gym, and restaurants in the hotel.
Amenities are something comfortable while customers are staying in the room such as shampoo, rinse, soup, dryer.
>> Amenities are things that bring comfort during their stay such as shampoo, rinse, soap, and dryer.
What should we do as a assignments about the hotel industry?
>>What should we do as an assignment about the hotel industry?
After the corona diease, many people are interested in their healt
>>After the corona disease, many people are interested in their health
OR
>>After the coronavirus many people became concerned about their health.
So hotel managers should think about adding health programs connected with robot systems.
>>So hotel managers should think about adding health programs connected with robot systems.
The robot system will be normalized in the future.
>>Correct
So health robot systems can make customers feel comfortable, and not worried about any diease like corona before.
>>So health robot systems can make customers feel comfortable, and not worried about any disease like corona before.
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