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If I could change anything about my current home, I would change the laundry room. These days, industrial complexes are spacious with laundry rooms and utility rooms, so there are many places that are easy to utilize, including washing machines, dryers, laundry products, and recycling recycling areas. However, the house we moved to has a very small laundry room, which is disappointing.

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I understand what you want to convey here because we women wanted to maximize our time in one area. It's frustrating that we cannot do anything.
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If I could change anything about my current home, I would change the laundry room.
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These days, industrial complexes are spacious with laundry rooms and utility rooms, so there are many places that are easy to utilize, including washing machines, dryers, laundry products, and recycling recycling areas.
>>>  These days, industrial complexes are spacious with laundry rooms and utility rooms, so many places are easy to utilize, including washing machines, dryers, laundry products, and recycling areas.

However, the house we moved to has a very small laundry room, which is disappointing.
>>> CORRECT!
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