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common cosmetics for men in Korea

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The common cosmetics for men in Korea are lotion, sunscreen and perfume. These are basic of cosmetics for men I think.

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Hi, Thomas!

Most Korean men who wear makeup like to use a pencil to draw perfect eyebrows, they also use tinted lip balm to moisturize their lips without looking too pale. Similarly to what you have said yesterday.

Taking care of your skin and overall physical well-being is crucial to your appearance, so you have to do it.

Go over my grammar suggestions. You did very well.

See you again.

-T. Donna~

The common cosmetics for men in Korea are lotion, sunscreen and perfume. 
>> Correct!

These are basic of cosmetics for men I think.
>> These are the basic cosmetics for men, I think.
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