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Hi.
Now my clinic is vacant without any patient, nonetheless, I decided to keep my mind peaceful.
There is no way to overcome this situation right now.
Dr. MJ ordered the strategy for advertisement to our staff managers, and I will watch them.
One of our staff managers is working for four years.
Today, we celebrated it with pleasure, and Dr.MJ gave her a four-day vacation.
After a moment from now on, I will call her in my office and make a new contract with a salary raise.
I hope that she will be satisfied with this condition.
During the morning class, your advice for my daughter gave me many thoughts.
As you said, I have to be more cautious to treat her.
When I was a teenager, I always had a discomfort to talk with my parents.
I used to get mad so easily like Irene did.
I was so stressed to get along with many friends, especially bullies.
My father seemed to be just strict, and my mother scolded me about everything.
Thus, I had a difficulty in talking with my parents at that time.
See

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

It is good that you maintained calm in spite of the patient and client arrival. Sometimes if you cannot solve the problem, just let it pass. No one among us was born to be certain about the future. We all live with doubts, fears, and uncertainty. On the other hand, we can hope, strive, and cope with situations as we go along. Thus, may the odds of this season be with you.

Congratulations to one of your managers! Four years is a milestone in one's career. I am sure she has seen so many staff come in go in the past and just like you, she witnessed how Dr. MJ's leadership works. She overcame all trials and hence, deserve some salary increase. I hope that she can serve as a role model to the rest of the staff.

Our children grow naturally just like us. We can only guess if a child is acting well or not that s/he got it from her mother or father, nothing more, nothing less. Their mannerisms, their mental capacity, character, among others are genetic, primarily. As you can recall, you were similar with Irene when you were young. Then, understanding our children is one of the ways to reflect on our childhood and the kind of kid we were before.

On your composition below, you only had a couple of grammar suggestions. You got almost all of your sentences correctly, well done! Thank you for your excellence in writing and speaking.

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

Now my clinic is vacant without any patient, nonetheless, I decided to keep my mind peaceful.
>> Correct!

There is no way to overcome this situation right now.
>> Correct!

Dr. MJ ordered the strategy for advertisement to our staff managers, and I will watch them.
>> Correct!
Or: (Remove the comma.)

One of our staff managers is working for four years.
>> Correct!
Or: One of our staff managers has been working for four years.

Today, we celebrated it with pleasure, and Dr.MJ gave her a four-day vacation.
>> Correct!

After a moment from now on, I will call her in my office and make a new contract with a salary raise.
>> Correct!

I hope that she will be satisfied with this condition.
>> Correct!

During the morning class, your advice for my daughter gave me many thoughts.
>> Correct!

As you said, I have to be more cautious to treat her.
>> Correct!

When I was a teenager, I always had a discomfort to talk with my parents.
>> Correct!

I used to get mad so easily like Irene did.
>> Correct!

I was so stressed to get along with many friends, especially bullies.
>> Correct!

My father seemed to be just strict, and my mother scolded me about everything.
>> Correct!

Thus, I had a difficulty in talking with my parents at that time.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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